sockmonkeyhere ([info]sockmonkeyhere) wrote,

Small Things (My Halloween Ficlet)

This is a vignette thingy that I wrote for the 2005 Halloween challenge at [info]darker_spike.

Awards won by it are here -- thank you, award folks!:
http://sockmonkeyhere.livejournal.com/17983.html

(Challenge requirement: Spike as a ghost)


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Title: Small Things

Author: sockmonkeyhere

Disclaimer: based on the TV series Angel, created by Mutant Enemy

Setting: AtS early season 5

Rating: G

Pairing: none

(Nope, no bloodshed or naughty bits, but hope you'll enjoy it anyway. ;) )

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Small Things

If you couldn't distance yourself from it physically, you could damn well distance it with atmosphere.

This, now; this spot was about as far away from Wolfram & Hart atmosphere-wise as one could get.

It was a little block of red and brown buildings a century old. Square-roofed, sturdy, its original front doors and windows and awnings were still largely intact, with concrete flower boxes and neat, tidy signs announcing its shops' current businesses. Up and down its east and west walls were rectangular outlines of tall, Palladian-topped shapes in a darker red; the bricked-in ghosts of windows no longer wanted in this air-conditioned day and age.

One of the shops was a cafe, and if its sign was to be believed, had been a cafe for some time: "Bryson's Lunch Counter. Established 1913." It was closed for the night now, but inside a waiter was visible, tidying the place up.

Spike stood across the street from the shops and watched the cafe idly. He'd discovered it several blocks away from Angel's shiny new law palace (God, what a joke THAT is), near the end of his invisible tether, when he'd had a gutful of the ponce and his white-collar minions and decided to seek some fresh air. He'd been tempted to ask the few bearable people there if they'd like to come along with him -- Lorne, perhaps, or sweet little Fred -- but in the end he'd come alone.

The waiter didn't seem to relish being alone, either. He kept looking around nervously as he worked, stacking the chairs upside-down on the tables, running a pushbroom over the floor, aligning the menu holders face-outward along the countertop.

What's he up to, then? Thinking of pinching something? Spike studied him for a moment longer, then crossed the street and stepped into the wall of the cafe.

Standing inside a solid object took some getting used to -- it was like being underwater with your eyes closed. He leaned forward a bit, until his face emerged through the plaster, safely camouflaged by a fern in a hanging basket. The waiter was still scurrying about. He didn't take anything, though; in fact he practically threw the broom into the utility closet, snatched his coat, switched off the lights, and then bolted for the front door in almost a panic. Once outside he seemed to relax, and carefully tested the lock before walking away.

The cafe sat in silence and darkness.

...No, wait, not total silence. Spike suddenly heard footsteps moving in front of the counter.

A man was there, short and balding and middle-aged. He wore round, wire-rimmed glasses, and what was left of his hair was parted in the middle and combed down with oil on either side. An apron covered the front of his suit and little pot belly. He looked soft and pink and fretful.

Casper Milquetoast, Spike thought to himself. Literally.

The little man wrung his hands together and looked at the chairs. Then one by one he took them down from the table nearest him and set them back on the floor. He went to the counter and turned all the menu holders neatly sideways, and rearranged the salt and pepper shakers on either side of them.

"The day shift's not going to agree with that, you know," Spike said quietly. He stepped out of the wall and stood in the darkened room. The little man froze and regarded him with wide, startled eyes, and said nothing.

"Better to leave everything the way you found it. They won't be able to keep a staff here otherwise, and they might have to sell off the place and turn it into a women's clothing outlet, and then where'll you be?"

The little man continued to stare. Then he turned back to the counter without a word and began repositioning the ketchup bottles. Spike shrugged and walked toward the door.

"Suit yourself, Mate. ...Oh, if you see a light, go to it. I'm told that's the proper thing to do. For some of us, anyway."

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[info]fenderlove

October 6 2005, 05:21:44 UTC 6 years ago

Aww, poor ghost!Spike. *cuddles him but he's incorporeal* *falls to the floor*

[info]sockmonkeyhere

October 6 2005, 06:02:00 UTC 6 years ago

(*LOL*) Go to the light, Fender! Go to the light!

[info]fenderlove

October 6 2005, 14:29:49 UTC 6 years ago

The light... the light... Gah, it burns!

[info]curiouswombat

October 6 2005, 07:31:52 UTC 6 years ago

Mr Bryson I presume? That is very nice, very,very nice.

[info]sockmonkeyhere

October 6 2005, 07:36:37 UTC 6 years ago

Nobody knoooooooooows... ;D

*spooky noises*

Thank you, wombat! I'm so glad you liked it.

[info]petzipellepingo

October 6 2005, 09:47:15 UTC 6 years ago

Poor ghost Spike, he really hated being like that. Mr. Bryson doesn't seem too happy about the whole situation either does he? Very nice.

[info]sockmonkeyhere

October 6 2005, 16:29:20 UTC 6 years ago

Poor ol' feller; those new-fangled employees are going to run all his customers off. ;)

Thanks for your compliment, petz! =D

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[info]sockmonkeyhere

October 6 2005, 22:54:27 UTC 6 years ago

Do you mean for the deadline you mentioned in the Oct.6 post in your journal? I can take a shot at betaing it if you like, or I can see if there's a community somewhere with regular beta volunteers. My e-mail's rtaylor@1starnet.com if you want to contact me to make arrangements. =)

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[info]sockmonkeyhere

October 7 2005, 02:07:53 UTC 6 years ago

That'll work! I'll keep an eye peeled for it.

[info]ozma914

October 21 2005, 09:42:01 UTC 6 years ago

Great story, but poor Mr. Bryson ... actually, that explains a lot about what's been going on in my kitchen. Or maybe it's mice.

[info]sockmonkeyhere

October 26 2005, 00:57:58 UTC 6 years ago

Mwaha! My stepfather used to claim that the mice held a parade in our kitchen every night. He said they used tomato soup cans for drums.

[info]ozma914

October 26 2005, 05:20:58 UTC 6 years ago

don't think too badly of me

Sadly, the mice are no longer parading through my kitchen. Just as in the Garfield comic strips, the mice got a little too bold, and it became impossible to ignore them anymore. I'm afraid the entire family met a quick and, I'm hoping, painless death as they came out, one by one, to check the "treats" I left for them.

[info]sockmonkeyhere

November 1 2005, 21:44:21 UTC 6 years ago

Re: don't think too badly of me

I hope any survivors don't try to egg your bedroom or T.P. your kitchen! (...'Cause it's, y'know, Halloween...)

*envisions dime-size sacks of flaming mouse turds on the front porch*

[info]ozma914

November 2 2005, 06:26:30 UTC 6 years ago

trick or meece

Ah. I thought those were charred match heads I was finding all over the porch. :-/

[info]sockmonkeyhere

November 2 2005, 17:43:08 UTC 6 years ago

Re: trick or meece

*spittake*

Heeeeeeeee!

[info]deadsoul820

November 23 2005, 13:12:32 UTC 6 years ago

Very cool and what a wonderful last line.

[info]sockmonkeyhere

November 23 2005, 22:48:59 UTC 6 years ago

Thank you, deadsoul! I can't wait to read the rest of your stories this weekend. I see that you write about "one-shot" BtVS/AtS canon characters, too! (You've written Sunday, I've written Jordy...boy, there's lots of them to choose from, aren't there?)

[info]deadsoul820

November 24 2005, 04:24:44 UTC 6 years ago

I love the minor characters and always want to know more about them - even if I have to make it up myself. I hope you enjoy my other stories, they tend to be pretty dark and twisted and not to everyone's taste, so no worries if they're not your cup of tea.

[info]manoah

November 1 2010, 21:29:38 UTC 1 year ago

An oldie, but a goodie. Perfect for the "Day of the Dead".

[info]sockmonkeyhere

November 1 2010, 22:11:50 UTC 1 year ago

Gracias! Hey, speaking of that, look whose post is right above yours: deadsoul's. *grin*
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